Comments of chapter undefined of The Oracle Paths

I really need to stockpile. But carvings take upper hand.

jake wake up

A horror ordeal in a deadspace-like setting. This should be good!

New ordeal came on fast! So take or leave the cricism, as I’ve enjoyed your writing and this certainly isnt a deal breaker. I’ve notied a marked increase in the velocity of the plot progression, which (to me at least) seems to have come at the expense of character development. Some examples are frequently the reader is reminded of Jake’s introverted nature through exposition rather than showing it. The conflict with sarah, I think could have been flushed out a little more and you wouldnt have needed the dialog with Xi to make sure to reader grasped it. If youre making these decisions, because of the medium for this story, and that is just how a daily chapter of a webnovel needs to go, so be it. Like i said earlier I still enjoy the story. Also if youre not looking for criticism feel free to completely ignore this.

So each ordeal has 5x the aether concentrate of the last one? Poor jake is always going to be the dumb at the start

Ready to get spooked out of your pants, everyone? I got the popcorn ready for when one of the passengers inevitably gets eviscerated behind some one-way glass windows. For real though, Ark, if you are reading this, you can't go wrong with this cliche!

they will all go out and find him alone in the corridor. They be like: mmh suspicious. Jake is the impostor... I like the setting for this ordeal and seems that what will be important in this ordeal won’t be only strength but also intelligence.

Ark u mentioned u liked terror infinity, and since this ordeals theme is horror, i suppose you based the ordeal or part of it in it? :D

Since it has aether density from 20 to 200 i think that the ship will have different sections with different density since many if not most people still haven't broken their 100 limit and since Jake is one of the few who has he is transported to the hardest zone? 🤔

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Thanks for the chapter

Giving me more Alien vibes tbh

but what is the fluid?

it seems more like an Alien film. Like the first one... The 8 traveler (or something like that)

I loved that film! now i want to see what would be the reaction of Sarah to the handsome Jake 😎

I liked that movie, just that in it they were only 3 that woke up

I'm super excited for this ordeal! I'm loving the mystery. thanks for the chapter Ark!

Finally the time has come

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