Comments of chapter undefined of The Oracle Paths
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Author are you horny ?. Even with previous *** scenes it was done a bit better than this. I feel like it's just instigate the horny readers. I am fine with him getting with someone as a reader but this is kinda of stupid. I understand her teasing but goddamn wait till after the ordeal
Homestly i think you are forgetting the bloodlIne effects. even if there was some character development for sarah its not like she is completely a different person so i dont have any issues the way this chapter progressed.
Just_A_Man:Maybe I shouldn't have come off like this. There is plenty proof that some traumatic good short-term effects and pretty bad ones. You gave a hit of her character before. As I reader my opinion was changed about her when she tried to survive and push for survivability as all human beings and I see her more than a slut. But this chapter brought back down. She is a slut. That's what this chapter portrays and that's what I got from it. It seems like all character development was dished out for some sexy scenes. It's dumb and it's stupid. The only I see this working I if Jake sees her more than that and it will help with his and her character development. But Rose who appeared before has better character development than her Sarah it seems.
The only horny person here is Sarah. There hasn't been any *** scenes concerning Jake directly, so I'm not sure what you're talking about. The closest things of a *** scene would be Sarah castrating her wannabe raper before the first Ordeal and the orgy during the first Ordeal, but none of Jake and his friends were involved in this. To be honest, I understand more the readers complaining about the fact he didn't get laid in this chapter. Sarah wasn't subtle in her advances if that's what you're talking about, but it was precisely her intention.
Any chance we get *** in this novel? I mean i wish there are some r18 scenes but at the very least just saying "and they did it" for plausibility. I understand that jack is a driven man but nobody is 100% driven for anything, that would be sociopath, and i dont think anybody is like that. Its one thing to say jack has changed and another altogether to say he can never procrastinate or enjoy anything except getting more aether .
Ark. well played mate. This is what i call a breather. with all the serious shit happening and even some foreboding in this chapter with the cOld winds and the tempErature drops i liked this chapter. it was a filler aNd a Good comedic one. Even tho sarah grew up And had some character development she is not an entirely new person and i agree how her character could end up pulling something like this after being cooped up for six months. I also agree with jakes play and it doesNot step away from his character either so kudos. Also stay safe duRing covid times!!
Aww, would be nice if the author wasn't a virgin afraid of women. You don't have to describe it, but suggesting the MC has an increased libido twice over just for him to act like a scared school boy is disappointing. He doesn't need to have a harem or anything to just be able to not look like a child.
