Comments of chapter undefined of Music for my Unspoken Words.... Chase me for your Second Chance

Hi I'm just a passerby for now, I like the plot and all I'm okay with the character selection and background information but please check your grammar and avoid going roundabout and literally sounding out the revenge plot out in the open. But still I want to see how this plot grow into fruition, so I might stick around 😌😁

Revenge stories are sometimes misleading where FL becomes weak in front of ML

Thanks

is this novel interesting ?

thanks for the chapter

It’s about the revenge methods, I think. Every author looks at it differently and the method is different.

Ohh yeah. Question. Aside from the mistress thing, you haven’t told us another reason for the divorce and why she wants revenge against the ex-husband and his family, and her family.

Thanks for the chapter the flow is interesting.

Quick tip: write in either in either all past or present tense. It’s very clunky when you write in both.

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