Comments of chapter undefined of Music for my Unspoken Words.... Chase me for your Second Chance

Hmmm, I find it hard to differentiate between the narration and dialogue.

Interesting start, I suppose the 5 years later is after the text in the description, maybe you would make that a prologue for easier access.

Thanks for the comment. This is the first time I wrote a novel.

Assuming this is at a 5 year jump from the synopsis.

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Interesting! but it is difficult to see the difference in dialogue and narration

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Thanks

interesting

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1st chapter it self is making me curious. Hope it has very good revenge and sweet story

it's really good

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