Comments of chapter undefined of The Hopeless Hero (Draft)
The Hopeless Hero (Draft)
Kuro_Kaen
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Kuro_KaenAuthorKuro_Kaen
CliffkunLolRekt:I’ll do it once you reach 30 chapters that’s to make shure you don’t drop it you know XD so if you do a chappy a day for 15 days you can see a revue Tho I will say I did not like how the wifu was kidnaped it’s a over done trope have the mc save her fast with her mind intact But have the mc keep a vandeta against the demons So the story will progress don’t have the mcs girl get hurt mentally to much and I swear stop with the potential ntr hinting no wifu rape key
Kuro_KaenAuthorKuro_Kaen
I plan on having Xylvia (the one who got taken captive) still play an important role in the story. I don't want her to become a "Damsel in Distress." I also plan on having Hiro (the main protagonist) be the one who gets damaged mentally. I don't want this series to be predictable, so I'm going to try and play with the double-edged sword and sed how it goes.