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Comments of chapter undefined of Child of Destiny

hanzzzz089
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now give him godlike title

shin_lol_7939
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also I'm confused is this really a romance? it says it has it but the female characters have had like a total of 10 minutes of book time. I don't even know who the FL is and I'm over 400 chapters in. I'm guessing it's Cloe but if it is that's just garbage writing considering she just showed up 250 chapters in out of nowhere. I thought it would be Alice (I believe that's her name right?) but all the sudden after like chapter 100 you just got rid of her. and when he met her in the game I'm like, ok! they become rivals then freinds and then start growing feelings for each other and 1 day they meet up in the real world and start dating. I'm like that sounds awesome and a great romance but...she just disappeared and that's the last time I saw her, then you add Cloe and it's felt extremely forced she forces him to go on a date with him when he doesn't even like her apparently. Idk maybe you have future planes with Alice (I think that's her name) I don't mind Cloe but it would be terrible writing if she's the FL.

shin_lol_7939
shin_lol_7939Lv4shin_lol_7939

also I'm confused is this really a romance? it says it has it but the female characters have had like a total of 10 minutes of book time. I don't even know who the FL is and I'm over 400 chapters in. I'm guessing it's Cloe but if it is that's just garbage writing considering she just showed up 250 chapters in out of nowhere. I thought it would be Alice (I believe that's her name right?) but all the sudden after like chapter 100 you just got rid of her. and when he met her in the game I'm like, ok! they become rivals then freinds and then start growing feelings for each other and 1 day they meet up in the real world and start dating. I'm like that sounds awesome and a great romance but...she just disappeared and that's the last time I saw her, then you add Cloe and it's felt extremely forced she forces him to go on a date with him when he doesn't even like her apparently. Idk maybe you have future planes with Alice (I think that's her name) I don't mind Cloe but it would be terrible writing if she's the FL.

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ProudMonkey

ProudMonkey
UmbraHaven
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Honestly good riddance the guy was toxic.