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Comments of chapter undefined of The Light that shall shine upon the Star Wars Galaxy

AZIMONDIAZ
AZIMONDIAZLv13AZIMONDIAZ

Ok so far so god not tat op and potencial to gro i woul prefer mandalorian because they are natural wariors but ok and i think with your secon wish you can do the same that with the first one the force love you a semi concient bin it sure woul protect him .

DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv13DragonGodSmith3000

Am i only one who glt turned off from story by him choosing human when their are lots of other humaniod races aime even look human but extend life n increase force sensitivity If you get a choice go big or go home smh

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Jeremy_Kramer
Jeremy_KramerLv5Jeremy_Kramer

Is there going to be a love interest?

M_E_P
M_E_PLv14M_E_P

Love it please continue writing

Sosynovsky
SosynovskyLv1Sosynovsky

Плохое начало. Можно было просто реинкарнировать главного героя в другом мире с системой без этой фигни с желаниями... почему до этого никто не может додуматься ?

DerangedPirate
DerangedPirateLv5DerangedPirate

Every fanfic author nowadays; "LeTs aDd A sYsTeM iT"lL bE gReAt!" *Sigh.. I'll give it a chance regardless because it's star wars but this is such a buzzkill.*

A_z_a_z_e_l
A_z_a_z_e_lLv1A_z_a_z_e_l

Please don't make it an Imerator.I'm tired of such fan fiction.Make him a mercenary, let him travel the world.

Brezer
BrezerLv14Brezer

it's odd that you went with wish and system. most today go wish so they dont have to keep up with the gamer stat stuff. personally I am a gamer system guy but wish setups do have pros. having some kind of builder skill like nano bots or something. set them loose on materials or structure with instructions on what to build and set back, replicator type or something lol anyway. good start and hope to see more

kaystricker03
kaystricker03Lv4kaystricker03

I understand nothing of wat they ar talking abt

Lord_immer
Lord_immerLv3Lord_immer

The wish are not the best

Jeremy_Babb_1848
Jeremy_Babb_1848Lv1Jeremy_Babb_1848

not a bad start

Dracul91
Dracul91Lv15Dracul91

I say save Fay, if you don't know who she is look her up.

JCMyers
JCMyersLv7JCMyers

I like this so far, but I think I would have looked for a long lived race.

easyread
easyreadLv11easyread

I encourage your willingness to be one of the few who write Star Wars fanfiction.

LazyAdept
LazyAdeptLv7LazyAdept

Thanks for the chapter

America_Yea
America_YeaLv3America_Yea

tags are messed up, is the mc a jedi or a sith at the moment they suggest both.

truck_sama
truck_samaLv2truck_sama

Keep it up

LordRavenclaw
LordRavenclawLv13LordRavenclaw

love it. please continue

Spartens
SpartensLv5Spartens

Thank you for the chapter

the_fat_taoist
the_fat_taoistLv14the_fat_taoist

I want to read more