Comments of chapter undefined of Eternal Saga: The Beginning

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Couple things. One, is this the same story universe as the Origin and her sisters. Two, it would be nice if Michi was Suzu reincarnated. Three, I think it would be nice if we could get some serious prolonged fight scenes. Four, if you haven't heard of it, Nero the legendary hunter has an interesting storyline and I like the way they use the level ups to remove impurities. Maybe every 10 levels or something, up to level 100 when there aren't any more impurities. Finally, I know everyone loves the cultivator schtick, but maybe try and skip it on this novel. Next, I like the idea of the crafting system, but could you be more descriptive with what they look like and what they wear, and also try to remember to mention any bodily changes cause in Full Dive: Eternal Phantasia, apparently Misaki's breast size changed from washboard to what I assume is around a D cup from the discriptions. Finally, maybe try to slow down the progression, cause in your other novels there are quite a few large time sci** that kinda throw us off. If we had a time skip of only a year, that isn't so bad, I'm talking about the 7 year and 30 year time skips in Phantasia that you did. Love it so far, and they should come back here one day to kill all the mimics.

maybe she should get a pet , like a summoner type skill, so she gets more comfortable with company

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tour a hater I love the story though I wld like more details on the love side your doing a great job I love it in certain genres there will be something similar or things ppl like or hate on but i personally love it

if the room might be full of traps... why did the MC just not inspect it in the first place? This is why i hate dumb mcs, they have such OP abilities, but they dont use them when needed.