EroJaki
You started quite edgy with all those soyboy and stuff, but at the same time your story arcs are very cliche storyline (girl hiding her identity) and cringy with the MC trying to act as cool guy all the time. So it's basically the same as any other story with just unnecessary overt ideology flaunt. They are fine but unnecessary to the story itself. Many grammatical mistakes as well. That is amendable with online softwares.