Suiyan
I have books i am reading that post a chapter a month and i am fine but this thissss how come this minimum 1 a day Makes me feel like its so painfully slow god i want more it's so good like crack
I was just gonna say that you should make him/them have more choice in the matter, like everyone is always deciding what Krune's life. They spread his name without asking, fought for him without consulting him (more than just asking once) and who knows what will happen in the future. But I like that they refused, getting some control back!
The universes foundation sounds like such a unique type, not talking about rare it is something that requires certain knowledge and some how there are 5 others on this continent alone? Who knows about others. I can't even describe how I feel about this, unsure if it is stupid, bad and an obvious attempt to somehow make the MC be "low key" since there are others. I would compare this to "stellar transformations", imagine if later on we found others achieved the same black hole cultivation skill. A universe foundation is just a concept so out of the world that it seems unreal that more than 1 has it in one world that it seems less impressive and more like a completely pulled out of the asss plot to somehow balance something there was no need to. I really cannot comprehend how that was a good idea, I actually thought I miss-read and had to confirm. Would have made more sense if others have a planet, at most or maybe a planet and moon since they can see that and understand. The entire plot of him having a universe is not only the lucky encounter but him being a wisp and having more understanding, the chances of that happening are so small it could not happen again.