I'm working on re-writing chapters from the spanish version, cuz is my main lenguaje. But i'll probably translate the re-writed chapters later, my english is better than before, and i'm gonna pay more attention to my grammar.
It is fun to see how the relationship progresses, but better a time jump from everything that happened in the relationship of incest, shino and his mother etc, so that he enters the game of Sao.