Comments of chapter undefined of Journey To Become A True God

Thanks for the chapter.

thx for the chap i dont know if you read what we wrote here or you read but dont care,still i wanna say what i feel needed to say 1-)you need to check out your grammar,its literally sucks 2-)you keep repeating same sentences.well we can understand it when you said once dont need to say twice or thrice.when im reading i feel like an idiot 3-)there is no depth in characters personalty.All women in novel feels like they are not women,no emotion,no rejection basically nothing,when they have *** all problem is solved lol 4-)i dont know if you read "against the gods" but your novel looks like it I hope you can do something for novel to be better

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