DarkForces
@author, it is not late and you can still correct the mistakes you make in the chapters.... so how about you start so that it gives a good impression on new readers. Here are some suggestions: write in your native language, go for google translate and add some of your own corrections if you feel to do so get an editor accept the gramatical mistakes the readers point out in the comments section and try to work on them for e.g: correction he for male and she for females if you honestly ask, I think readers would be more than happy to point out mistakes in the paragraph comments and you can implement them afterwords please don't take it negatively as I am enjoying reading this novel and wish to continue to do so. Keep up the good work... :)