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Comments of chapter undefined of Journey To Become A True God

Deen_Ace_
Deen_Ace_Lv4Deen_Ace_

RIP ENGLISH BROTHER

theSeriusPrvrt
theSeriusPrvrtLv5theSeriusPrvrt

@author, it is not late and you can still correct the mistakes you make in the chapters.... so how about you start so that it gives a good impression on new readers. Here are some suggestions: write in your native language, go for google translate and add some of your own corrections if you feel to do so get an editor accept the gramatical mistakes the readers point out in the comments section and try to work on them for e.g: correction he for male and she for females if you honestly ask, I think readers would be more than happy to point out mistakes in the paragraph comments and you can implement them afterwords please don't take it negatively as I am enjoying reading this novel and wish to continue to do so. Keep up the good work... :)

Ascathon_Asceron
Ascathon_AsceronLv12Ascathon_Asceron

Daaaaaannnnnngggggg I had a brain damage reading this. Whats worse is its a critical Hit.

ROMAN_EAGLE
ROMAN_EAGLELv14ROMAN_EAGLE

Dropped

Beziik
BeziikLv14Beziik

So not only do I have to avoid a stroke reading but I also have to resist the MC being a virgin? If this doesn't change in record time I'm out with a 1 star review for this trash. 3 stars is already the maximum this should get

KinghtariusWR
KinghtariusWRLv15KinghtariusWR

BULL SHIT

meatgrinder
meatgrinderLv10meatgrinder

critical hit 666 combo....dropped

Rexzal
RexzalLv6Rexzal

oh my God, got me critical hit,... he/him/his/brother(male) she/her/sister (female) pls pls pls grammar kindly correct it...

VanshRaj
VanshRajLv4VanshRaj

thanks for the chapter

Oni_punch_man
Oni_punch_manLv5Oni_punch_man

Mc: I don't want to expose my powers. Me: what are you a super hero? Mc: *JUMPS OVER a dense crowd* Me: so much for not exposing.

Lurced
LurcedLv3Lurced

It’s confusing sometimes lel..

Hentai_Sauce
Hentai_SauceLv5Hentai_Sauce

I feel like reading BL. Fck 😫

Abeorohm
AbeorohmLv11Abeorohm

You really should get an editor

Niha_Nahirr
Niha_NahirrLv13Niha_Nahirr

Everyone is so mad in the comment, a I do have to agree, the novel is kind of...... But we will see how it progresses

Marian1594
Marian1594Lv5Marian1594

:)

FC_Martinez
FC_MartinezLv14FC_Martinez

I think the story is good, but the grammar is killing me..

SOLACE
SOLACELv3SOLACE

I don't get why they're running after he's just incredibly handsome right it's not like he's beautiful like Noblesse or something so it should only be high level attraction.

TunneITy
TunneITyLv3TunneITy

gag4a5g6a

TunneITy
TunneITyLv3TunneITy

sfas

skyfatherbuluku
skyfatherbulukuLv5skyfatherbuluku

Wow I never thought reading could be this painful.