Comments of chapter undefined of Journey To Become A True God

Nope. Can't read it anymore, grammar is too bad... shame too, it had the potential to be a great novel with just a bit of proofreading.

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The grammar is now good still need some improvement to be a wonderful novel Thanks for the chapter

I felt obliged to say this isn't a translation. It's an original work by an Indonesian fellow. He probably is using google translate or something for part of this though. I guess it's impressive that he's pushed on for so long like this

me to author

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thanks for the chapter

im indonesian and I can read and understand what hes trying to say cuz he was translating his novel literally fron indonesian to english.. he should've just make indonesian novel instead and let indonesian reader only to read his novel!!! lol

Would really prefer if the author could find some way to edit and fix this. It makes it really hard to read. Everything else is good though...

Is it me or Is the Grammer in this chapter worse than the first one 🤬🤬😤