Comments of chapter undefined of Undetermined

Hey, great story so far! Looking forward to reading the rest of the story! I wanted to let you know that I noticed at least one mistake where u didn't capitalize the I in "i'm", but other than that, I am really enjoying the beginning of this book. And don't worry, this part of the story where it tells a bit of the character's background and past life doesn't seem boring to me at all.

Great start, it seems your gonna be using your math skills alot in this book.

Very cool thus far.