I kind of don’t like how she is so desperate to get a boyfriend because she’s lonely and single. Even though she’s beautiful, her personality doesn’t suit her somehow but it’s my opinion. It was just awkward, while reading this perspective.
I don‘t like her personallity bc
1) she searched for an boyfriend and also look if you‘re strong and i think she is the type who‘ll leave you once someone better come.
But it‘s your fanfic and it was good but im out