Redsunworld
Lovely chapter. Fun fact some things in this book has inspired some things in my own ongoing book. Its just insane how much work you put into this. How long did it take you to create the world of this book down to the finer details, before ever posting the first chapters. Did it take months? Or even years? Its insane. I gave you a golden ticket. If i have a 100 i would give it all. This book is one of few that still amazes me.
This Idea of an Utopia and such a Nightmare Realm below is quite interresting. How does it handle Beings that are born in the Nightmare Realm? Are they automatically branded as evil and bared from entering the Utopia? Or are they transfered to the Utopia? And if they are transfered to good Realm, what about their (branded as evil) parents? After all, for a child to grow up without their parents can't be seen as something utopic...