Comments of chapter undefined of Abyssal Lord of the Magi World

Enjoyed this chapter as well. I pointed out a few errors for you in the chapter comments you can just delete them when you get around to editing but overall it was still a good read keep up the hard work👍🏿

Hey its, with not wiht. Your story has a lot of grammatical problems, download "Grammarly" App from play store as it auto corrects lots of mistakes. Anyway, nice work.

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thanks for the chapter

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the first chapter narration was mid or you could say average so I went with the flow but after that cringey opening speech of 'I have awoken' was deadass cringe I really wanted to drop it after I read the last line. I hope this novel's doesn't disappoint me further

The story is very interesting keep it up

I know, I know suspension of disbelief... but i still can't fathom how an AI chip can travel with the soul

Thanks for the chapter

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