Enjoyed this chapter as well. I pointed out a few errors for you in the chapter comments you can just delete them when you get around to editing but overall it was still a good read keep up the hard workđđż
Hey its, with not wiht.
Your story has a lot of grammatical problems, download "Grammarly" App from play store as it auto corrects lots of mistakes.
Anyway, nice work.
the first chapter narration was mid or you could say average so I went with the flow but after that cringey opening speech of 'I have awoken' was deadass cringe I really wanted to drop it after I read the last line. I hope this novel's doesn't disappoint me further
