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Comments of chapter undefined of Otherworld Adventure

Darknight1919
Darknight1919Lv15Darknight1919

I love the story read all the way to the last chapter and I am wondering if you are still writing

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Michael_Crew
Michael_CrewLv15Michael_Crew

Thank you for your "rant". I will be glad to give some criticism where it is needed and if your family enjoyed it I'm sure we will also. The family is always the best place to start. Thank you for sharing your story with us readers.

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afirdaus
afirdausLv12afirdaus

You don't need to feel sorry about your novel. It's a great novel!

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PotatoKeeper
PotatoKeeperLv4PotatoKeeper

Let me try hooman. If i find some mistake, i Will try say it honestly so sorry if i hurt you heart hooman.

tatsuya_K_O_A
tatsuya_K_O_ALv13tatsuya_K_O_A

new reader here i will give it try

DioSDeLCaoS
DioSDeLCaoSLv10DioSDeLCaoS

haren?