Comments of chapter undefined of Ultimate Fruit

PLS MAKE MARVEL FANFIC AUTHOR-SAMA

The first half of this fanfic was really good but poor execution on the second half. It became a wish-fulfilling type of fanfic (eventhough it always has been) but you know what i mean. It's understandable because i feel like you took most of the ideas from the real plot of One Piece then you just alter it with the appearances of Lucas but since you have reach the latest plot of One Piece, you have no idea what happen next so you don't have any reference or idea to do for the next plot (and to alter it) and you have to make your own plot (which is bad too). This is just my opinion though so i might be all wrong but i feel like it went downhill when your fanfic also reach the latest plot of original One Piece.

marvel ff with cultivation or Saiyan bloodline or Omnitrix(there is one but mc's very bad fanboy) man m addicted to these types most FF's are left halfway

How to kill a story or be anticlimatic, then this chapter is for you.

plot twist: im is actually gol d roger 🤣

Thanks for the Chapter~!

I really feel like dropping this even though it is 14 chapters to the end just because of the Lacius again, I hate him and you make me hate him more but all that does is make me enjoy reading it less

I bet Tsuru will feel like she have meet Lucas and in the end of it Jewelry Bonney will turn Tsuru younger and many more BS. Which is my kind of route! Please do it!

Exp

Marvel fic please

Great chapter as always

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter!!!!

When will elsa appear?

thanks for the chapter 👍 need more

Marvel fanfic author San and the Mc has the powers of The Homelander or superman and make him anti hero

Thank you for the chapter.

nice

I would definitely read the vr one

Great chapter thanks.