InvisibleDolphin
I binged it to this chapter today but I get too sleepy to continue... before I abandonen this story I want to give feedback: Somehow it feels like nothing happened since chapter 13, for 50 whole chapters... Sure, MCs relationship with Elena and Rose got deeper and MC started to cultivate and train a bit, but nothing else that I would call noteworthy. No new *** partner (granted, but at least 1 new interest) and absolutely nothing new about the Life Giver Orb. The MCs isn't even actively checking on it to note any changes. And the MC isn't even taking his other studies (Refining or Biology for example) seriously. All he does in those 50 chapters is train his body, cultivate, train his fighting, do some academy tests, eat, romance his 2 girlfriends and sleep. Nothing else, 0 plot development whatsoever. The storys premise/idea is very good, and the writing itself isn't bad, but for me the pace is simply too slow. 63 chapters that could have condensed to only 5 chapters with only minor losses in the character relationship developments. 63 chapters and only around 1-2 months passed (with only 1 child conceived) in a story where the goal is to conceive as many children as possible. Too slow! đ´ So I guess I won't miss anything major if I don't read the last 21 chapters as of right now... I might continue though if it has like 1000 chapters more (or if it would have been more fast paced to begin with).