Comments of chapter undefined of Extreme Love- Indonesia

Maaf kk, saya sblm ke crita ini sdh baca cerita kk yg lain. Cerita kk bagus, saya suka.... Cm kl boleh saran, tlg tanda baca nya lbh dirapikan kk. Penggunaan titik, tanda kutip tuk perkataan seseorang, spasi setelah titik, dll. Jd tuk memahami jalan cerita ny lbh enak. Itu sedikit saran saja, semoga berkenan. Maaf jika tdk berkenan. Terimakasih tuk ceritanya kk 🙏

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ceritanya bagus banget.... alur ceritanya beda sendiri, semangat Thor👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

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saran saja penulisannya perlu diperbaiki lagi, tanda baca, dan penggunaan huruf2 besarnya.

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Awal yg bagus

lanjut , bagus kok

ceritanya bgud

Wah ceritanya keren dan mantap nieh Thor☺️👍🏻 Tetapi ada baiknya kalau penulisannya dibuat sesuai PUEBI atau EYD agar kedepannya terlihat menarik dan rapi ya thor😊 Semangat berkaryanya

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Aku suka banget ceritanya. Sangat menarik sedikit rapiin aj ceritanya

saya suka ceritanya

ceritanya bagus, jangan lupa mampir di cerita saya ya.

Lanjut