Comments of chapter undefined of Alpha Tristan

Wow, such great imagery. Also words create a nice dark mood andnpulls you in. This is such a treat to read thanks for such polished work. What a great first chapter. I cant wait to read ch 2.

I'm really loving this so far! The parallels between the main characters and hades/persephone are really well done

Wow nice story so far.

WELLLL, I feel like our little timid MC ought to be grown enough to put rumors aside and form her own opinion BUT even if she knew his past and it scared her, she ought to know being his mate puts her in the safe zone. know what I'm saying?!

My best wishes for u and ur story

Nice chapter

God I just felt awesome reading just this one chapter. So cool mainly the monologue. 😘😘🤩

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Wow at that first chap!!!😲😲😲 The words are like poetry in motion!!!❤️❤️❤️

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Nice story

i like myths! i am ready for this book! yeay!

This was such a great beginning to the story! I wish we had more details on how the FL looked and what the ML’s voice sounded like. Also, how did they decide that she was going to be his mate? Did they just randomly pick her?

I love this book! Came back to read it again!

I love this chapter!!! Omg I’m in love thank you to the author !

Wow!!!i found a jewel!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

So far, so good and beyond great 😊😍

I had to skip some parts cause it felt like I was in her position and I was scared and nervous. nervous 😰

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

hades is so misunderstood, I jut love it that this guy is also misunderstood by everyone nice