Comments of chapter undefined of I'm the King Of Technology
I'm the King Of Technology
lumydee
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Hey there, I have some suggestion for the story tell me what you think about them? 1- I think you have ommited a big amount of auxiliary technology and some basic ones too. I would like it if you could somehow introduce them so that the technology of Baymard may seem more complete. 2- The political system is kinda disappointing? Not just for the kingdoms around Baymard but also for Baymard itself. I mean there's no politics in Baymard to speak of, at least I haven't seen any indication of that. I think the addition of complex issues of politics and other things(like divide between certain people or other human struggles since time immemorial) should be introduced as problems in the Baymardian Society for Landon to solve or atleast create solutions to mitigate the damage. Although technology solves many problems it also gives rise to other problems you should introduce some of them and not let the system help him. Technological reforms and social reforms go hand in hand. 3- The education system is good but I think you know the education system yours is based isn't perfect . Baymard will be will be advancing very fast in terms of technology, so as a King, Landon should start preparing for the future right now. I mean Baymard is still a society based largely on workers or labourers. And I haven't seen any indication of Landon trying to make his people prepared for what's about to come. Like the advent of computers will change the lives of many. Many will lose jobs that they have grown accoustmed to. And yes this tech will bring prosperity but not everyone can adapt to this change because of how they have been trained. Your education system and the education systems it is based on is the direct result of the industrial revolution reaching a peak and the lack of skilled workers or labourers that the countries had. So, essentially you are creating workers for your factories and other things. This is good enough in any other kingdom building story but not in this one, its kinda short sighted for Landon to not prepare for a time when automation is gonna become a big issue. I mean he will easily make AI which would in turn deprive many of their income and security leading to social unrest. And this is not gonna happen slowly and eventually like in the real world it's gonna happen quick and sudden. Moreover he can't prepare for it when the time eventually comes because this is a very disruptive technology and the effects it's gonna have on the society enormous. You can google some educational reforms on how to transform the worker producing schools and colleges to innovator cum workers producing schools and colleges. I think you can spice things up with this. 4- Why the hell have not we not made a air force till now? Even if he can't make choppers and fighter jets he can a zepplin right? He already has the technology for hot air balloon. 5- Also, I would really love it if you could inform us how much power does The King hold alone. How much power the King Father and Queen Mother hold over let's say the ministers. Are there even ministries in Baymard?I know there are ministers but they all act like managers of company sector rather than actual ministers. Also , the Queen how much power does hold over someone let's say like the King Father or Queen Mother? Also, I am not talking about influence here when I say "power". What I mean is the executive powers The Monarchy holds. Like the army, the commerce, taxation, land rights and so on. 6-The R&D is too insufficient. We can't always have Landon give them everything isn't he making them a self sufficient society? I think he should do something about that. He cant always do everything for them all the time. They have to innovate themselves too. 7- Can we get more info about the Continents please? Like all the Continents in Heartfilia should have been given some amount of description by now. Like can we know which hemisphere the pyno continent is. If there are continents connected by land? L
