Comments of chapter undefined of I'm the King Of Technology
I'm the King Of Technology
lumydee
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Why do I feel the last 4-5 chapters were rushed? Little things like grammar and sentence structure seemed odd or absent at times. Dear author if you need time to do this right by all means take it. Especially with the privilege some people expect a certain standard of value for their money. I will venture a guess here and I thought a few times that you're writing this story off the cuffs. In other words you are making it up as you go. This can be a perfectly fine way to write a novel but you operate with no safety net of stockpiled chapters. The pressure to produce can be overwhelming. All the more so when you amass a whole comment section of readers who want more. If you need to take some time say a week to get ahead of the game, just say it and I have total respect for that. As the reader I get way more out of the story if the proofreading is done and chapters are properly edited. Cliffhangers can be great but their overuse can do more harm than good. I wouldn't waste my time telling you this if I didn't think the story and your talent as an author was worth it.
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