Comments of chapter undefined of I'm the King Of Technology
I'm the King Of Technology
lumydee
Chapter comments56
Ahh...where to start... Clock confirmed to not exist outside baymard. Daylight saving time and standardized unit outside still no explanation. Why are you in a hurry to be noticed,makes no sense from novel perspective. Im sure even that duke you just offended has no time to go to baymard soon. Why trade outside,clocks have not much use outside honestly. Trade perfume and soap and machine arts product if you must.luxury items. I guess you want to move things along but it doesnt make much sense. Why dont you use the system memory thing more? Use it on the duke or something,such great tool and barely any use. Taking in slaves and refugees okay. If a war happens and people get displaced,great news for baymard industry. Outside trade and get noticed, no way! We need more time
Author should really point out whenever you asked the system for help. Constructive criticism time: For example,the beginning and foundation of this novel would not be so weird and wrong if it was simply explained as the system giving a helping hand. Basically your machines and industries as far as the readers are concerned appeared out of nowhere. The speed of invention and introduction isnt the problem(though can be improved) but the origin of them.this is what you call a huge plothole. I personally have no problem with the speed but the abrupt introduction of things with no explanation or support is jarring to say the least. I stopped when i read heat detecting and cameras for a second. Just say it was purchased from the system.it would be enough. Also cnc machines soon? How about the heavy presses like the 50000ton press which is super important to countries. Never neglect the tools. Can you buy a.i. The size of machines shouldnt be a problem for the system. Like a microchip and the giant press. As far as the system is concerned,there is no difference in difficulty in making them.
Baymard is turning out to be like Academy City from toaru majutsu no index except real life and less advanced version. There is something (just wrong) exporting advanced tech like alarm clocks to medieval people/probably morons(no offense to anyone from any time period) when something simple like soap will be seen as a magical (witchcraft/devil)and revolutionary product. Like there is no point at all in this action. So many better options available,why CLOCKS of all things?(leave that for baymard personal use, build a clock tower instead author) Please don't make Landon stupid again author. The first battle of baymard was bad enough. No way Landon could have achieved anywhere near that result with solid cannon ball and tactic in real life, 12000 knights from that dude is WAY too powerful even with cannons and guns. The first enemy was WAY too strong and the novel should have ended right there realistically. Second is shooting that slaver dude and 11 henchmen, could have used system for that and make them never come back and forget. No one will notice anything,people will just think they changed their minds. I really like this novel,so full of potential. But Landon's actions during major plot points of the story is making me lose brain cells. Keep going author, you can do better, make this novel the best. At least make it unique among all the others out there like being brave enough to use Field theory and Vedic sciences. Inspire others to do the same,these theories have been studied by great minds like tesla,faraday and many many others thought the many ages.
