lumydee
okay the mc is a chicken sh!t!.. not even got a freaking back bone to tell his own mother to stop treating him like a 6 year old.. thats just discusting... and that stupid maid girl, is just to much.. turn it the hell down or just stop it and make her a normal maid.. because so far its just irritating as f!ck.. so make both of them stop.. or i will just end up wanting them dead..🤦🤦 again..🤦🤦🤦..
Hello, I am kp (Editor at Goodnovel), I have read your book and I am impressed by your writing style. We are a platform helping authors get reliable and long term income from their hobbies such as writing. We are currently approaching authors who have an ability to grasp readers' attention in their story and capture the readers in the world setting. I like your work and think you have the potential. I would like to invite you to work along with us. If you are interested or would like to know more information, please mail me at kp_46@yahoo.com I would request you to keep the subject as (Author- Book name) so I can quickly identify you. Even if your story is contracted it is never late to write another one, then missing an opportunity. Do give it a try. Thankyou.
one irritating cliché of isekai is the MC's useless thoughts, words, or actions that keep saying "I'm not from this world". yeah to all authors, the first chapter almost always tells us readers that it's an isekai genre and that's after the synopsis before we even open the novel. if the MC isn't in the here and now at least by the 15th chapter I'll usually drop it.