Look dude, I like the plot of the story and all, but seriously stop with the smut. Its gross and is ruining the story. You've dedicated at least 4 chapters to smut already and it's getting tiresome. I came here for the story, not this knockoff erotic novel ****.
I think you are stretching it little bit more.
If it can end in 3 chapters, then why 4.
Since it's system, then less cultivation BS, more system BS.
BUT THE FLOW OF THE STORY IS GOOD SO FAR,AND
PLOT IS COOL. THANKS FOR YOUR HARD WORK.