Comments of chapter undefined of While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
While Others Cultivate, I Use My Unique RPG Leveling System to Cultivate Smut Romance With Their Girlfriends!
MotivatedSloth
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SlimJimLv6SlimJim
I really can't read this. The spelling and grammar leave a lot to be desired. Getting an editor would help tremendously.
SlimJimLv6SlimJim
That is fair. At some point you may need to go back and fix these trial chapters. You could hook a many more people in for the premium content if there is the possibility of a technically well written story that also has a interesting plot. That stuff seems to matter to me more and more these days. Anyway, all the best.
MotivatedSloth:It would. I could even fix it myself, but I would rather write more chapters/more novels rather than waste my time on the early chapters. It's a trial, once you get through the bad parts, you will get to reach the rest of this beautiful story <3
