Aizen_Dleitch
me: we have been with you for a long long time ...actually I really like it mom: *screaming from the kitchen* ME mom: ...well she too, but if you want to rewrite it it's ok ...i suppose. I will say that I will be disappointed but well I...we can wait mom: WHAAAT? me: THAT WE CAN WAIT?! mom: AH YEAH me: ...
whaaa, where did you- wha? this is literally my favorite fic, hardly any fics have evil MC's and the ones that do are almost always shite, but yours is actually amazing!, i love reading this every time, I started reading when there was only like 30~ or so chapters and its been my favorite ever since. now as much as i want to contractually oblige you to continue working on this forever you are, sadly, ultimately the author and thus hold ultimate power over weather or not its discontinued but know that i do love this story, i get how you could say its 'repetitive' but i disagree, its like saying Call of Duty is repetitive, whilst true in a semantic sense as the same thing is repeated, this does not deduct any joy from experiencing it, and whilst your story may hold similarities in later chapters as with earlier chapters they are still new despite that and i don't think i could ever tire of reading it. all in all i would be incredibly grateful for you to continue and i'd even be willing assistant in any way i can, be it beta reading or practicing insults on me or whatever, point lies id be happy to help. Or at the very least release all you've saved up as a parting gift, Your biggest (likely)fan, uh-um-..Me :)
This is honestly one of the few Fanfics on this site that I enjoy, I find it really interesting to read about an overpowered villains perspective in different anime worlds, so I would be really sad and disappointed if you stopped writing this story, but in the end it's up to you, and this is just my opinion. P.S. I really hope you continue writing this masterpiece.
I truly like this novel as an author myself I can see what you're getting at and in the end you have the final say but I still love to see you continue this work. maybe instead of just focusing on MC becoming Super O P try focusing more on world-building give them a different Focus instead of becoming God like every other MC. make the story more about the enemies, the friends, the slaves, the schemes. you can do world-building by continuing this novel is well you just have to make the MC realize there's no real point to becoming all-powerful because then they'll be nothing to do. since your MC probably doesn't want to become like satima in one punch man so it's sounds like something he would do probably. MC should then focus on the thrill of the hunt The Challenge in every story. that allows the MC to go to less powerful world like The Witcher or Star vs. the forces of evil and still have a compelling story line. doing this MC could be fulfilled as well as the readers by showing evil and messed up you can make the world truly be.
For that reason I don't usually read fanfiction that isn't complete. More than 70% of the authors do not finish their works. It is not a problem when they have only 10 or 20 chapters, but when they reach more than 100 and you are enjoying reading ... Well, it is annoying. The question is, do I keep reading or do I leave it right here? Did the author finish the story or not? And the most important. If you continue it, will it be with enthusiasm or will it be a story that loses enthusiasm as it progresses?
I personally like story also stop calling MC evil he's really not that evil he's just a gamer who loves xp and doesn't care how to get it, unless he goes all Chaos God's from warhammer route or maybe going to a world and releasing a mix of a bunch of different zombie viruses for fun then mc can be called evil for now he's just farming he plot.
Just started reading like a couple days ago.. already one of my favourite Fanfic ... The main character is already OP so maybe make it more plot driving and less focus on power grind. For instance, Make him seem strong but not as strong as he really is, So people dont think its impossible to beat him. Build the side characters, people like gin (people plotting to take him down) and maybe people loyal to him too, but he’s heartless, doesnt really care regardless ... Even give him some fake “noble cause” or something .. like in the naruto world, he wants to collect all the tailed beast for ultimate power so people start trying to prevent him from doing it ... in the end this Is all a Game to him and he beats them when they think theyve won ... i really like villain, hope you continue