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Good for start new story. If I can give suggestion need improve on build story, many story seems like skips scenes. How about make some background before one scenes appears. Can’t waits to know how this story will be ended. I wish the author can make some scenes on this story related with figure from Alicia, ru, Rou, ryu, etc; make Shi ai a bit stronger so she can fight together with ah hai (if possible^^) and another figure like her step brother, Alicia, ru, etc for defeats enemy. I can’t waits Matt love story, hope his not become gay ;p Good job and good luck
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