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[Alpha]

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jhonnybravo721
jhonnybravo721Lv4jhonnybravo721

Where are the next chapters?? [img=update][img=update]

Yanagi_sense1
Yanagi_sense1Lv13Yanagi_sense1

wew...batman stole the spotlight in this chapter and made alfie look like a rookie lol... i know alfie is supposed to be weakened currently but his instincts should've at least made sure he didn't get beat up like a pulp...The dude went through a war and has been fighting ninjas for probably years so even if his body is weakened and he cannot use chu, his instincts should've atleast made him stand on equal footing with him...and when i mean equal, i mean not getting beaten up one sidedly....sheesh he looked like a fool in this chap

Daoist184799
Daoist184799Lv4Daoist184799

you nerphed the mc here. He has literally fought a war through pure skill while surviving assassination attempts from ninjas, his instinct and skills should be top notch even though he is still weakened

El_Masturbatoor
El_MasturbatoorLv5El_Masturbatoor

I.....do not know what is the purpose of this.....thing u call chapter but i will no longer speak and just wait....

Kappaccino
KappaccinoLv6Kappaccino

that was annoying, the chapter was all about "batman". like wtf.

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LordValmar
LordValmarLv4LordValmar

I'm getting the impression that this world has multiple reincarnators. The Wonderwoman character, Selene I believe it was, is probably one of them. She realized the world she was in was Marvel thus could tell that McBride was also like her since he was adopting a DC persona which stands out in Marvel. Just my guess. I might be way off. Lol. Also, whats with people being upset over Alfie not being OP over Batman? The dude woke up from 70 years nap. Unless I'm forgetting, he doesn't actually have the super soldier serum like Steve. The only reason he was so powerful and even able to survive the freezing is because his chi. He wakes up weaker than ever from having to sustain and perserve himself for 70 years on ice. He is in a world vastly different from what he expected, in a weaken state, probably starving, probably low on chi, basically naked except for what he could grab. Now he's fighting a shadowmagic-infused Batman. Even if it isn't actually this world's Bruce Wayne chances are this Batman has been training since he was a kid since thats pretty much how the Hand operates from what I understand. In comparison the only real martial training Alfie has, far as I recall, is essentially self-taught. He's held up so well because for the most part all his opponents have been base humans, even if some ninjas had training. Even if he was in his prime Batman could probably give him a challenge. Alfie is not now nor has ever been thus far a really OP character for Marvel. Its just that his enemies have all been, for Marvel standards, more street-level thugs.

TheOther
TheOtherLv3TheOther

stopping to think, the mc is very weak !!

Master_bastard
Master_bastardLv5Master_bastard

the ****.... Stop confusing us..... and mass update. will ya

Demarcis04
Demarcis04Lv4Demarcis04

Idiots who calls the mc nerfed has literally forgotten he spent 70 years frozen in ice

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King_P
King_PLv14King_P

Firstly author san I never "Forced" you to change your Novel 🧐 Just was asking your "Opinion" of why Mc couldn't teleport to save his ass from being frozen for 70+ years. In which speaking logically, a person if he knows about a danger to his life would do anything to prevent it No matter the circumstances. If Author San can't differentiate my concerns related to that "Particular plot" to something absurd as me telling you to "change the Story" than I'm sorry you couldn't get my point of view.

wrobe06118
wrobe06118Lv2wrobe06118

haiya mc have knowledge what earth was gonna face in the future and still choice to get frozen with capt america instead of using that 70 yrs buffer time to train more or get things that will make him powerful not to mention he dint even think about what the people close to him will feel if he go down with cap america dont mention about that bullshit about losing his sling ring he lost it so long ago before they started planing the final fight and between those chapters there were days he pretty much free he couldve easily ask for 2 day free time to go to england or any place near him that has a sanctum and ask for a new ring

Sandford_96
Sandford_96Lv5Sandford_96

Didnt like that you are chucking excuses around for the Mc gettng his ass beat for no reason!

The_Best_Stalker
The_Best_StalkerLv5The_Best_Stalker

The chapter is filled with dark figure and batman

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Martello_D_King
Martello_D_KingLv3Martello_D_King

Waiting for an update here dear author im really loving this story

maganam
maganamLv4maganam

Hmmmm? What happened to our "hobo with beard"? Why name of this fanfic now is [Alpha]? I'm confused but i will just go with the flow, i guess?!

akangsnow
akangsnowLv1akangsnow

I'm just skimming,it's so annoying

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King_P
King_PLv14King_P

the entire plot is basically turning into something else Which is definitely gonna pump down your readers author San!! I recon to change the plot from where he is about to be frozen!!! He had Knowledge of Mystic Arts for Petes sake!! He also had foreknowledge about the plane crash in which Steve gonna have his ass frozen!! This totally doesn't make any sense whatever!!!

ComTolManBoePyaJhu
ComTolManBoePyaJhuLv6ComTolManBoePyaJhu

HFS

OverlordBGs
OverlordBGsLv14OverlordBGs

Great chapter

Jordon_B
Jordon_BLv1Jordon_B

Well.. this story has been ruined. Congrats. Can't believe I wasted my time on this..

Hawphy
HawphyLv5Hawphy

where is the author? chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter chapter