Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of the Demon God

Author I will clear the problem of this story. It lacks clarity, it lacks any particular focus and most importantly you are too jumpy. You should not enter one arc in middle of another it seems to forced and makes the story feel your profound presence which is a no no (author presence should be invisible as you are writing it in 3rd person). Too much filler and nonsense / less optimal story line makes reader bored as mc fumbles to find a new ground.