MaxwellKHA
First chapter's problem is a big lack of commonsense. I already said what was the problem by commenting some parts but really common sense and human emotions are lacking. The MC is looking like a Robot with a self learning program with only a single chance of success on a super hard mission, it basically the moment.However we have to recognize the author trying to be original on the way the story starts. The story looks promising and if the author progress in the thoughts of his story than it could become an excellent isekai with modern tech novel.