The author of the book...... please edit the grammar..... it's too poor and discourages one to continue to read the story.... and the sentence construction....o
my heart is breaking for andy. author, i am hoping that she and zach will be able to talk it out soon... i don't like seeing andy this way. want her to toughen up like her cousin brina...
The way your story is written is too poor. ... I can barely understand the words. ..... yet the story would be interesting if it is edited and writing with the correct grammar. ..