that's trouble me too, my English not good enough to convince and explain the reader. my writing style more like komuko light novel style, but the timeline of the story far more slower and followed the chronology
That's quite the background you've laid out. Now things like heroes and villians make more sense ☺️
Story pacing was sometimes confusing due to lack of background but this clears out some details about the 3 realms.
Hope you're doing well and that this story gets continued.
Cheers 🤠