Comments of chapter undefined of Immortals: The Curse of Samsara

All I gotta say,

Great beginning and there's absolutely nothing wrong with clinches. The only thing is never to overuse them or use it by making it best in your own way

great start indeed

This is fantastic for your first attempt at writing. Really well done!

Came back to read the prologue, and well, noticed that author's writing has improved so much! :)

A great start author ❤️.

Love the way you write. Keep up the good work!

Here to support one of the Gods of Grammar :) Thank you for spotting my mistakes!

Your writing style is really good!

By the first chapter I must admit that your writing skills are much better than me haha keep it up.

Very intriguing, looking forward to more.

Noice

Thx

I like it so far it's really good

comenzando una nueva novela hasta ahora un poco confusa pero va bien :)

I don't like this, short chapter with the same cliché "This is boring you know?" Why do all authors whether new or experienced enough make the same mistake? Tired of explaining but I'm bored. SKIP bye ~~