Comments of chapter undefined of Pocket Hunting Dimension

Wtf is wrong with the presentation of this story?? The plot, setup, characters, everything is acceptable by why do they come together and look awkward? The presentation is just crappy for some reason.

Im not used to the word spasmed.... It's just weird. Just use ' twitched ' instead please

He is blessed that his family owns a clothes factory, so he can change 3 times a day

Week a$$ MC will it be like this for rest of novel getting bullied 🙄😏🤔😐

1. Excuse me spats are sexy af, 3 times over on a sweaty athletic woman. 2. WHAT BAD REVIEW YOU WANT TO SEE YOUR SISTER NAKED?

thanks for the chapter

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The MC had the most OP cheat out there...so to balance it out we get some comedy...granted the comedy is not very good but at least there is no face slapping and bullying from young lords...so i'm not complaining

Yep

Thanks for the chapter 👍

Exp

I must not fear. Fear is the mind-killer. Fear is the little-death that brings total obliteration. I will face my fear. I will permit it to pass over me and through me. And when it has gone past I will turn the inner eye to see its path. Where the fear has gone there will be nothing. Only I will remain. Frank Herbert, Dune (Dune Chronicles, #1)

The world was a terrible place, cruel, pitiless, dark as a bad dream. Not a good place to live. Only in books could you find pity, comfort, happiness - and love. Books loved anyone who opened them, they gave you security and friendship and didn't ask anything in return; they never went away, never, not even when you treated them badly. Cornelia Funke, The Inkheart Trilogy: Inkheart, Inkspell, Inkdeath

Thx for the chap

bananas

Hmm

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Thanks for the chapter.

Thx