Comments of chapter undefined of Hi I'm married, but I'm sleeping with my boss

Again, without that whole love at first sight it would be more interesting. You could have put like he did without thinking and wondering about his actions. The protagonist is Meilin, but you didn’t analyze her feeling about the kissing, her doubts about coming to work after that, her emotions of being treated coldly or how she felt when she discovered the other girl. You could also have inserted about he was invited by the other girl, that he wanted initially reject but after thinking of meilin married he decided to accept.

This is just way too fast good concept though but a slower progression between them would be great

nice one

Dear author..no one is running after you so why u write like the world is ending tomorrow? I can't even feel anything towards them bcuz u r not describing anything

For this to be written on a whim, it is a very interesting story from the start. I've already added it. So yeah I like it. I like how fast the development for each other is because it could be considered that from their first encounter they had fallen for each other and hadn't realized it until later. So now they know but there's that one thing that's in the way of their happiness. Another thing, I've noticed that that badly needing edits of some of these novels be the best novels to read. NL!

is it a love at fitst sight?but its too past its ok if both of them are singleits quite cofusing

I agree i wanted to know how the both felt about the kiss,his reaction when she turned hhim down and her reaction when his ex girlfriend was there her asking him to go to any party and her reaction to it. She should've been shocked,furious and them arguing before she left and haru running after her

I really like this book! I can't put it down :)

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You are going too fast

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Thanks for the chapter

Love this