Solarhopes
You should have described better that massage part. About the feeling of being touched by another man gently and stuff like that. Furthermore, it is unlikely to ask if she loves him after one night. You could have used that occasion to do some backstory about him with the excuse of becoming more intimate. You could also have described about she returned home and decided to change her aspect for her new jobs, her feelings and doubts. Since you’ve started giving her a dark background, you should try to face complex aspect of a woman life but with a positive light that the CEO could represent towards the future
Its way to fast and she needs to divorce him and how did he know the combo to the safe when she was the only one who but money in there. I think he secretly played like he was sleeping and looked over her shoulder or something to find out the combo. Also Melin should've put all the money in the bank under her name and told the bank that if her husband comes and ask to empty it that they are required by law to ask the person permission first before the funds are withdrawn or put it in a safe deposit box in the bank and leave nothing from the bank like to deposit slip or anything.Nothing