LittleBlueLake
In your writing it is normal to have ramblings, and sometimes most of the chapter is the protagonist's thoughts on these topics, but I noticed that in this arc there are many of these ramblings about the politics of the vampire clans. It's actually very interesting to read the various subjects you bring up, including several curiosities that make me ask myself "how do you know that"?. And I understand that it's part of the plot but it ends up taking up too much time for me. Sorry I don't know how to say it any other way, but this is the first time I've skipped paragraphs in a chapter of this novel. I wanted to see more of what was going on in that setting, and the ramblings got in my way, and this wasn't the first time this had happened. Anyway, sorry if this was confusing, I made this text with the help of the translator, and I didn't mean to be rude, I love this novel. I just haven't given up on the webnovel yet for this novel.