Comments of chapter undefined of Celestial Peak

Ok I quit reading here. The story is great, developing well and different from others with Plotarmor MC but please please either write it in your own language and use a good translation program or hire somebody who proofreads your stuff cause let us be real the english you are using is barely grade school level. Often you mix up personel pronouns, repeat unnecessary things in the following sentence, get the wrong grammar or use the wrong words. So in all your story is great but it gets ruined through the bad translation which feels like only 1 grade above MTL but still only readable for a few chapters a time without downgrading your general english comprehension. If it gets better later please let me know since I would really like to follow the story when it beomes more readable.