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Comments of chapter undefined of Naked Sword Art

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AMaWEEb
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I(we) need photos 👼

Shadow_Knight_5814
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what's your discord

RaLegacy:You can find photos for each character in my discord.
MJAgo
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Wtf😂 at least add a few words of introduction for the main characters, their origin and looks...

DaoistEy63PM
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please just 2likes am new here

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Xana69
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OrsusZoktavir
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here is my thoughts on having a character sheet in this, in the first few characters you have seemed to have given some plot that would have given you more words if used in story. I sit here worrying that you might have put in spoilers into your own character introduction.

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DaoistLPIko3
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good evening happy chrismas

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Celestial_Wolf
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I saw grandmother anD i wAs like 👁👅👁 go get Err

Big_John_52
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Thanks for the chapter

OverlordAinz1
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Can you made Lei Xin Yi a permanent harem member?

iLeech
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What's the Netori tag for? None of the girls are married or are in a relationship. Baiting readers is not nice.

Marc_19
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Ajmal_Khan_8856
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the "adult" scenes are very evident! I like the idea of the missions that the female lead takes to earn a living. she kindly lets the ML stay at hers but he goes off soliciting immediately, the next day! There are too many dubious and unethical situations in the chapter episodes list. Maybe a one off detail in one chapter would have sufficed without the need to explain the KS and techniques in detail. Photos of drawings of manga type cartoon characters, is what I am hoping most people are requesting. I have seen amateurish drawings that look nothing like real people (alive or dead), that could serve as illustrations and are not manga cartoon style, if that would breach "copyright"! Although grammar and writing style seems okay and easy to follow, I agree that the names and mission scenarios are implausible. I was hoping for martial art's/combat style technical lists, instead of innuendo or euphemism!

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Sudipto_Sarkar_7879
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Fadly22
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where the photo is not on discord

Ai_Evangeline
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me gustarĂ­a leer esto, pero lo malo de los nombres chinos, es que los mencionan en cada momento

Prince_Scofield_7
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Fhaatty
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zp

Gabriel_Gaudio
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Thanks for the chapter

Prince_Scofield_7
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See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon