Comments of chapter undefined of Naked Sword Art
Naked Sword Art
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First of all, stop referring to pussies as a girl's "little sister," that's weird. Also, why did you write your character into an abusive relationship? The abuse of a husband by a wife is real, and it's things like this that downplay the issue. Especially in what you've written, in which the abuse surpasses verbal and is actually physical. And don't try to downplay it by saying "He can't feel it, he's too strong," SHE SHOULDN'T BE ATTACKING HIM IN THE FIRST PLACE! That's not how a healthy relationship works, you talk out your issues, not resorting to violence, and this doesn't change even if it's a cultivation world. Sorry for the rant, this was just bothering me. Beyond that, good work.
Don't make the MC have children so soon. That manipulation of that slut so that she does not abandon her is too unpleasant.
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