Comments of chapter undefined of Naked Sword Art
Naked Sword Art
RaLegacy
Chapter comments53
While I quite enjoyed this chapter, I feel like this new female appeared too suddenly. I was confused when he line came up, thinking it really came out of nowhere. If she was walking up to him, perhaps he could have picked up her aggressive stance with his hearing and you could introduce her through his observation before she berates him. Definitely not a big issue, just a small suggestion, as it broke the flow of the story for a moment.
story was flowing good but starting to get a little sloppy . Is he just gonna keep grabbing a woman from this lecture hall " dual cultivate " then walk back in and grab another? Most stories like these the lecturer at sects are super strict so how is this lecturer fine with the ruckus he has made and now second time he is walking out with a woman from the class? Is the lecturer that lenient or uncaring?
