RaLegacy
Thanks for the hard work. Plot story, so far is good. Pace of the story is good. "THE GIFT OF SIGHT"-MARVELOUS. I think main theme is dual cultivation, supposedly. A new outlook; fresh & learning. A strict but caring father, and mother's are always lovely. A great and greater start. Keep and make it more enjoyable. Thanks 🙏
i don't know i kinda felt like the main character should have had hot standing sex with her instead of standing doggystyle i just kinda ruined the moment in the sex scene also i just think he should have been naked cause i doubt you would go into lake or a river to clean yourself and wear clothes instead of washing them in the river while you get clean it just isn't very realistic especially since this character sounds very smart plus also you would catch a cold if you had clothes on in a river plus a tanktop really that isn't very apropriate for the time period especially since the the character seems very free and masculine i doubt he would wear a tank top especially since he probably want to not wear one since it would be easier to have sex if you have less clothes although i do get what you do mean on how it could be sexy since felling something under the part that it's hidden could be pretty sexy but though the character isn't very conservative especially with with the way he handle sex although conservative do have a high rate of cheating and just being overall creepy but still though i doubt he's the type of person to cheat or lie although he did lie about his name he still told the the truth in the end and was honest as he could realistically especially since their stranger although to hime no beautiful woman is a stranger