NixxxiE
I'm surprised, the progress was faster than i thought but not disappointed though if it was faster than this i might have been - slick move there authorsan very delicate balance ;P i find that once the relationships are established I'm no longer invested in the story - too easy, expected etc. especially if its modern contemporary stuff, that's why the ideal genre for me is fantasy or sci-fi, luckily the main obstacle is still unresolved here so my interest is still on.