Comments of chapter undefined of Two-faced : Doting Husband & Shameless Wife

it's ok author sometimes mistakes happen to everyone so take it easy we still can understand the Story then ok

interesting but, some grammatical errors

interesting

Over protective brothers

So cute he has fall for his friends little sister and he hasn't relied it yet.🥰

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This is a good first chapter

Like it...😍😍😍

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Interesting.... Totally different intro.... 🤩🤩🤩🤩

I wanted to read it since the plot seemed interesting and the story is not too long but after giving a shot to the first chapter I don't think I can read the rest grammatical errors can happen but at this point it's really a bother since I can't read as smoothly as I would want to. It's a pity it was not edited well enough...

No problem

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Author, this needs a lot of editing. Tge names, the story, who's expressing their thoughts, grammar, everything needs a correction. You really need a good editor.

Interesting story...