Comments of chapter undefined of Soul Evolution System

I like the chapters so far but omg does it piss me off when systems give a penalty of death for stupid missions. ITS HIS FIRST MISSION YET IF HE DOSENT KILL A FUCKING GOBLIN HE DIES. LIKE THE FUCK.

Author Cmon. Stop Having Negative Thoughts about MC Appearance. This is Only the Start and There You Go. Already Throwing Negatives We Want to Enjoy this Web Novel. It's Quite Rare to See Novel With MC Having Handsome Appearance.

Slave system (Do "mission" or die)......kinda disappointing hope overall story is good and system dosent drag it down.

-I think people didn't understand like failure in the mission means death is that if he fails he dies, it is not that the system will kill him but that he will die against the enemy

Why do all the authors pick fucking japanese swords? I mean the swords that are much harder to use that a normal double edges sword... Sigh

Too much monologue

You should use Grammarly on PC it's very useful and it's Free. The chapter is barely readable, tho the story is very interesting and has a lot of potential the grammars are throwing me off. Still it's a good start 😊

so the name of the chapter is monster subjugation and he kills 3 goblins. Great!! with a monologue of 500 words before the great hunt.😑

Thanks for the chapter!!!! Love the fight scene and the descriptions of the fight scenes, instead of just making them super simple. Keep up the amazing work drack

thank you for the chapter ❤️ ❤️

Gracias por los capítulos ♥♥♥♥♥ :D

Love chap . And the grammar XD.. Last time I read this on another web the grammar sucks very much so , that stop reading

Like it 👍

Author san your english is bad. I think you need grammarly and hemingway to fix your novel. I am just recommending, not criticizing. Please make it better.

thanks more harem

i think the god didn't give him enough stuff like give him a ability to use the sword or skills and adjust his mentality

hmm okay this is getting a little to close to "epic" without it seeming to look like a knock off but still willing to keep reading

Thanks for the chapter